六级高分作文及其分析
发表时间：2025-08-27六级高分作文及其分析17篇。
同学们，2025年6月的大学英语六级考试中，作文是展示英语综合能力的重要环节，其成绩对总分影响深远。六级作文不仅仅是简单的词句拼凑，更是语言能力、逻辑思维、知识储备和创新表达的全面比拼。以下是高分作文及分析，供大家参考与学习。
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)现在有越来越多人的选择节食，有的人是为了健康，但是更多的人是为了有一个苗条的身材
2)分析节食减肥可能带来的影响
3)你的建议
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响，提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因;阐述节食不当可能带来的影响;针对节食给出“我”的建议。
On Dieting
Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, [1]especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They [2]become the leading numbers who go on a diet.
[3]However, dieting might [4]bring great negative effects on people. [3]For one thing, quite a lot of people don’t really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting [5]not only is useless but also might damage their health. [3]For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. [3]As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.
[6]Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. [3]In my opinion, dieting,[7]for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. [8]Only with right guidance can dieting work [9]as we expect.
[1]“尤其”，表示强调。
[2]“成为主力军”。
[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[4]用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。
[5]“not only… but also”用于连接并列成分。
[6]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。
[7]“不管因为什么原因”，whatever意为“无论什么”。
[8]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。
[9]“像我们期望的那样”。
1.佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health.
临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。
2.佳句：In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance.
临摹： 无论你的目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。
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3.佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect.
临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。
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【KEY】
1. Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality
2. Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it.
3. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡
2)分析产生该现象的原因
3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 我要高分
Credit Cards on Campus
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。
Credit Cards on Campus
In recent years, credit cards have [1]gained more popularity among college students. [2]With banks’ more focus on college market, [3]an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.
[4]The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. [5]Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, [6]which is [7]a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. [5]Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and [8]hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. [5]Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. [7]Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.
[5]As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. [5]However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. [5]Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. [9]Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
Student Investors ID the Stock Market Chinas stock market is luring students looking to sec how their textbook teachings fare in real life. While there arc no concrete data on the student- investor, business professors say the market boom has boosted the number of students looking to play around with stocks. They invest in the stock market with money from parents and sometimes with amount equal to several times their annual tuition.
Some people are alarmed at the trend. As investing in the stock market involves many risks, they say,college students are very likely to lose, which may put students and ministry assets at risk. However, some are supportive. As more and more students become shareholders, they will help raise tie general quality of shareholders and there will be more rational stock buyers in securities market, which is actually a good thing.
In my view, college students may give stock investment a try if possible. Stock investment may be a way to make fast money and help finance students schooling. Even if the students are likely to lose in the stock market, it may still bring about valuable investment experience they can learn if they dont try.
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on living in the virtual world. Try to imagine what will happen when people spend more and more time in the virtual world instead of interacting in the real world. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200.
参考范文：
The relation between the virtual world and the real one has aroused public attention in recent years, and has become a stormy topic on in TV programs, newspapers, university classes and many aspects of our everyday life.
The topic’s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from the virtual world based on the Web is a double-edged sword for human beings in the real world. For one thing, it is undoubted that the virtual world does bring men unprecedented experience, such as on-line shopping, chat with friends and family members on the web, playing video games, e-commerce and so on; it seems that the virtual world can meet all requirements of humans. For another thing, as the wisest creature on the planet, we, humans should reflect on what will take place if they take more and more time to live in the virtual world rather than in the real world. For my part, if we do so, the time we spend with friends or family will become less. And we hardly see them once in a week. It will make us feel lonely if we continue to be indulged in the virtual world instead of enjoying the real life , such as talking with friends on the phone or going out with them.
To my best understanding, we should distinguish that the virtual world is totally different from the real one and the former cannot replace the latter either. Otherwise we will be reduced to the slaves in the virtual reality. If we want to enjoy our life and keep our friendship more effectively, we should spend more time with them in our real life. Only in this way can we not only make full use of the communication tool in the virtual word but also make our real life more meaningful and colorful.
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
My hometown is very beautiful. My hometown has got tall trees. My hometown has many big supermarkets. You can buy some foods. You can eat foods. You can drink some juice.
I am from Ningan road primary school. It is in Qingdao. My school is very beautiful. My home is near the school. I often walk to school. .My school is very big. It has a big playground. I love my school.
My favorite festival is Easter. Easter is in spring.People give children chocolate eggs. Some Easter eggs are big and some are small.Sometimes there are small eggs in the big eggs.I like Easter.
I want to be a teacher. Because I think the teacher is very glory.I can teach them some useful lore.I want to earnest learn.I want day day up.
I will have picnic. I will eat some foods. I will very excited. I will drink some juice. I will very happy.
Today l am going to have a picnic in the park.the sun is shining. L am going to eat some foods. L am going to drink juice. L am going to play baseball.l am going to happy.
My mother is very pretty. She has long, yellow hair.and she has black eyes.she likes running.
But she do not likes play football. She often plays baseball.
我的家乡非常美丽。我的家乡有很高的树。我的家乡有许多大超市。你可以买一些食物。你可以吃食物。你可以喝一些果汁。
我来自宁安路小学。它在青岛。我的学校很漂亮。我家在学校附近。我经常步行上学。我的学校很大。它有一个大操场。我爱我的学校。
我最喜欢的节日是复活节。复活节在春天。人们给孩子们巧克力蛋。复活节彩蛋有的大，有的小。有时大鸡蛋里也有小鸡蛋。我喜欢复活节。
我想成为一名教师。因为我觉得老师很光荣。我可以教他们一些有用的知识。我想认真学习。我想要天天向上。
我要去野餐。我会吃一些食物。我会非常兴奋的'。我要喝一些果汁。我会很高兴的。
今天我要去公园野餐。阳光明媚。我要吃一些食物。我要喝果汁。我要去打棒球。我要快乐。
我妈妈很漂亮。她有一头黄色的长发。她有一双黑色的眼睛。他喜欢跑步。
但是她不喜欢踢足球。她经常打棒球。
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
I like many students, in this summer holiday went to cram school, mainly in order to make up for the fall semester courses, good next semester can be met. The cram school is bitter and sweet.
The daily routine is hard and the schedule is full, and it will be tiring in a few days. Get up early to go to school every day, and a cram school often three or four hours, the home to do my homework, in case of still have a class in the afternoon, only simple lunch outside, feeling all day even dont have time to breathe heavily tone.
But also have many busy life happiness, remedial lessons can obviously learn new content, increase broaden their knowledge, improve the ability to learn, to study in the ocean waves on the find belongs to fun; In addition, I can make many new friends in the cram school. I can chat and play with each other in the next class.
Although very dont like the cram school, feeling in my heart the cram school very bitter, but every time I was in class on time, also let I harvest a lot of knowledge, when I see my teachers and classmates envy, my heart is very beautiful, only pay will have harvest, is not false.
我喜欢很多同学，在这个暑假里去补习班，主要是为了补上秋季学期的课程，好的下学期才能遇到。补习班有苦有甜。
日常工作很辛苦，日程安排也很满，过几天就会很累。每天早起去上学，经常上三四个小时的补习班，在家里做作业，万一下午还有课，只在外面吃简单的午饭，感觉一整天连喘粗气的时间都没有。
但也有许多忙碌的生活快乐，补课显然可以学到新的'内容，增加拓宽自己的知识面，提高学习能力，在海浪中学习上发现属于乐趣；此外，我可以在补习班结交许多新朋友。我可以在下节课上互相聊天和玩耍。
虽然很不喜欢补习班，感觉在我心里补习班很苦，但每次我准时上课，也让我收获了很多知识，当我看到我的老师和同学羡慕的时候，我的心很美，只有付出才会有收获，不是假的。
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
Xiamen is a major city on the southeast coast of the Peoples Republic of China.It is administered as a sub-provincial city of Fujian province .
The local vernacular is Amoy,a dialect of Southern Min,also called Hokkien.Amoy is widely used and understood across the southern region of Fujian province as well as overseas.While it is widely spoken in and around Xiamen,the Amoy dialect has no official status,and the official language of all government business is Mandarin.
Xiamen and its surrounding countryside is known for its scenery and tree-lined beaches.Gulangyu,also known as Piano Island,is a popular weekend getaway with views of the city and features many Victorian-era style European edifices.Xiamens Botanical Garden is a nature lovers paradise.The Buddhist Nanputuo Temple,dating back to the Tang Dynasty,is a national treasure.Xiamen is also famous for its history as a frontline in the Chinese Civil War with Taiwan over Jinmen (also known as Jinmen or Quemoy) 50 years ago.One attraction for tourists is to view Kinmen,a group of islands a few kilometres away and under Taiwanese control,from Xiamen island.
厦门是中华人民共和国东南沿海的一个主要城市。它是福建省的一个副省级城市。
当地的方言是厦门话，闽南的一种方言，也叫福建话。厦门在福建省南部地区以及海外被广泛使用和理解。厦门话在厦门及其周边地区广泛使用，但厦门话没有官方地位，所有政府事务的官方语言都是普通话。
厦门及其周边的乡村以其风景和绿树成荫的海滩而闻名。鼓浪屿，也被称为钢琴岛，是一个受欢迎的周末度假胜地，可以欣赏到城市的景色，并以许多维多利亚时代风格的.欧洲建筑为特色。厦门植物园是大自然爱好者的天堂。佛教的南普陀寺，可以追溯到唐代，是一个国宝。厦门也因其50年前与台湾在金门（也称金门或金门）内战中的前线而闻名。游客的一个景点是从厦门岛观看金门，这是一组几公里外的岛屿，由台湾控制。
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
汪伦对李白仰慕已久，这一天，终于鼓起勇气，给李白发送了一封电子邮件。李白这边打开邮箱一看，只见上面写着：我这边有十里桃花，万家酒店，盼先生来赏花饮酒！
李白看了立刻披衣上马，直奔汪伦家乡。汪伦早在村边等候，见李白策马扬鞭飞奔而来喜得手舞足蹈。
进了家门，汪伦妻子父母早已备好茶饭，请李白上座。酒过三巡，李白问道：“老兄，哪儿您说的十里桃花万家酒店呢？我这一路上怎么没有见到？”汪伦脸上带着歉意说：“这……这个嘛，是这样的……请跟我来吧！”于是李白跟随汪伦来到院门外。汪伦手指前面一带碧水蓝天说：“其实这十里桃花，是十里之外的一个渡口，叫桃花渡：万家酒店是一个姓万的人开的酒店。”“好啊，汪伦老兄，你竟敢欺骗我啊！”“要不是这样，您肯来吗？”
李白在汪伦住处逗留了几日，两个人流连山水，吟诗作赋，建立了兄弟般的情谊。但李白是个呆不住的人，有更美的风景在召唤他。这天，他决意离开。
为了避开汪伦的挽留，李白决定不辞而别，天还没亮，李白就来到桃花渡，踏上了一条等候在江边的客船。船夫撑起长篙，正要开船，忽然岸上传来洪亮的歌声。李白回头一看，只见汪伦带全家老小，正在为他踏歌送行。李白的'眼泪自然流了下来。他向岸上使劲挥了挥手……
回到家，李白打开了电脑，见汪伦QQ上的头像是亮的，就把自己在船上酝酿而成的诗，发送了过去——
赠汪伦
李白乘舟将欲行，忽闻岸上踏歌声。
桃花潭水深千尺，不及汪伦送我情。
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
古往今，有不少诗人留下来美词佳句，而我却情有独钟于李煜的《渔父词》。
唐朝有李白写有《把酒问月》：宋朝有苏轼留有思乡的《水调歌头》;清朝有郑燮留有出尘脱俗的诗句;当代有叶挺，写有雄心壮志的《囚歌》;现有朱自清文笔清新的《荷塘月色》......张满红的《声声慢》“凄凄惨惨戚戚”，让我记忆犹新，“逃之夭夭，灼灼其华”则让我一段时间内沉迷其中，后来，经过上网查询，这是一首贺新娘的诗;秦始皇一统七国，荆轲去刺秦王，所写“风萧萧兮易水寒，壮士一去兮不复还”悲壮情怀和不完成任务誓不回还的坚定意志描写的淋漓尽致。
“一棹春风一叶舟，一纶茧缕一轻钩。花满渚，酒满瓯，万顷波中得自由。”《渔父词》这首诗，是我偶然从一首歌末尾听来的，刚开始，没什么，后来，不知不觉，竟开始喜欢这首诗了，这首诗表现出文人绝不与俗世同流合污的乐观向上的精神，“万顷波中再得自由"则是我对这首诗的理解。
比起现代的诗词散文，我最喜欢的还是古诗词，《洞仙歌》、《湘妃怨》、《玉楼春》、《虞美人》、《临江仙》都别具一番风昧，有的.凄美惨凉;有的则是抒景感怀;而那宫妃，也是众多诗人锁描写人物：花蕊夫人、杨贵妃、虞美人、梅妃......
”我欲乘风归去，有恐......“诗、词是一个朝代、一个人的代表，具有历史风范，不恐绝代风华，往事已去，只是那往事背后令人心酸的回忆。
风华绝代，往事如烟;乱世之中，那些唐诗宋词，一一保存完整，流芳百世，细细品味时，会让你收获意外的惊喜，这也是一种乐趣，意料之中的乐趣。
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
这学期里，我们学过了好多古诗，老师为了检验一下我们学习的成果并督促我们再次温习古诗，决定举行一次古诗大赛。
比赛开始，激动人心的时刻已经到来了，老师宣布比赛规则：首先同学们抽签，签上都写着古诗题目，抽到哪个就背哪个，自己背不下来扣分，别人接着抢答背下来时加分，背不下来不扣分。
首先是孙齐承，第一首没背下来，老师要扣分，一看，黑板上没有分，大家都哄堂大笑，再看看孙齐承呢？脸红得像两个大苹果，突然，孙齐承“扑通”一下跪地大喊：“照顾好我七舅老爷，我不活了！”然后作撞墙状，我们“拼命”把他拉住，可不能让他驾鹤西游哇！
然后再说陈艺文，由于她是老师最原始的学生，所以可以说倒背如流，如数家珍，所以呢，面对此情此景，我只能干瞪眼干着急啦！
不过，我也毫不示弱，不论谁背，我只要会背，一律抢答，所以我的分数一点点增加了，看着我马上要超过陈艺文，我不禁欣喜万分，当时有一首古诗叫《忆秦娥。秋思》，我正背着，突然卡壳了，当时我像热锅上的蚂蚁——团团转。眼看都要背下来了，可就差一句——倒霉呀！就是因为这首诗，结束后，陈艺文第一，我屈居第二。不过有奖品，很漂亮，我也很喜欢。
这场激烈的`比赛，让我懂了，只有辛勤地付出，才有甘甜的收获。
⬬ 六级高分作文及其分析 ⬬
一、珍惜时间，制定计划。教育学考研考生要合理安排时间、制定一份周详的复习计划。制定计划前先要熟悉数学、逻辑、作文和英语这四门课程的考试内容，哪些是考试重点、难点?哪些内容自己比较薄弱?然后再针对这些问题制定具体计划。对时间分配、内容安排、复习进度等有一个宏观的把握，尽量做到详细、实用、高效。在平时复习的过程中，对照计划督促自己，哪段时间主攻英语，哪段时间主攻数学，什么时间必须完成第一轮复习，什么时间进入考前系统复习，事先有计划，并严格执行，才能有条不紊，不丢不落。
二、端正态度，积极备考。教育学考研认为态度最重要，端正态度，是成功的前提。俗话说“好将军不打无准备的战争”，在职研究生考试比普研考试内容少，不涉及政治和专业课，所以很容易让人产生错觉，感觉和普研相比它相对简单，混混就能过。其实，考试涉及的知识面非常广、内容很多，如果态度不端正，很难通过考试。所以首先必须真正把考试当回事，抱着“不考则已，一考就过，不给自己第二次机会”的态度，这是决定能否顺利通过考试的关键。
三、针对重点，教育学考研集中突破。在职研究生考试内容包括数学、逻辑、作文及英语，其中前三项内容是综合测试，英语是单独测试。综合与英语均设立了单科分数线，单科必须都过线的考生才能进入面试。因在日常工作中接触英语较少，个人感觉英语难度较大，难度介于大学英语四级与六级之间，所以，复习重点应放在英语上。加大对英语词汇量的.扩充，提高阅读理解的正确率，抓住英语作文关键得分点。
四、掌握方法，高效做题。要想通过考试，适量做题必不可少。如果光看书不做题，那么遇到具体题目的时候，就会措手不及。考生必须熟悉题型，掌握题目难度和出题技巧。在备考的前两个阶段，针对各考点做题，在冲刺阶段，则应做整套模拟题。通过做题，增强快速反映能力，提高运算速度和准确率。同时，要注意分析，总结归类，这样可以起到事半功倍的效果。建议教育学考研考生历年真题必须多做几遍，这样可以更快地掌握规律，不断积累临考经验。
五、熟悉套路，按部就班。目前，社会上对在职研究生考试的相关培训比较多，考生应结合自身学习自觉性和基础情况进行合理定位，自觉性和基础较好的考生完全没必要报名参加辅导班。不报名参加培训班的考生应该把英语大小作文、有效性分析论证及论说文的套路熟记于心，这几个方面都有规定的格式和基本段落评分标准，考生应重视基本格式，多背几篇范文，按照标准格式答题至少可以使考试成绩提高10分以上。“按套路出牌”，有的时候是一种睿智的保守战略。
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虽然考研结束已经半年了，我也正式成为华中科技大学的一名硕士研究生了，但是四五个月的考研备战经历我终生难忘，这段经历已经深深地烙在我的心里。还记得每天早晨天还没亮就从床上爬起来去占座的情景，每天晚上十点钟拖着路灯下疲惫的身影回寝室的场景也历历在目。这段经历将成为我人生宝贵的财富，不仅仅是因为它让我获得了攻读研究生的资格，更重要的是它教给我一个人生哲理：凡事必须得坚持。我是从10年九月一号开始正式投入到考研备战之中，一直到09年一月八号，除去国庆节休息三天，我每天都坚持去图书馆上自习。
除了坚持天天上自习外，还有重要的一点就是要有目标，包括长远的目标和短期的目标。长远的目标，是指在未来一个月或者更长的时间内，将哪本专业课课本全部看完，或者将政治的重点全部过一遍等等；短期的目标可以分为一星期的目标、一天的目标甚至一天中某个时间段的目标。有了清晰的目标和计划之后，你会发现自己仿佛一下子找到了方向，复习起来也有了强大的动力。
我在七月中旬报了一个政治辅导班，上了一个星期的课程，这基本上算是我暑假的全部收获。我从九月一号开始正式投入到紧张的考研复习之中。首先，我给自己定了一个长远的规划，共分五步：
（1）从九月一号到十月一号：每天的上午、下午以及晚上三个时间段，分别复习专业课、英语和专业课（政治不用这么早复习）。在这一个月的`时间里，要以一门专业课为主，到了十月一号基本上这门专业课的教材要看完；英语的复习主要就是做阅读，培养自己的语感，同时积累自己的词汇量。
（2）从十月一号到十一月一号：每天的三个时间段，分别复习政治、英语和专业课。政治的复习推荐使用任汝芬的序列一，每天上午要认真熟记里面的重点和知识点，另外在每看完一章之后要做做相关配套的习题以加深记忆，这段时间里可以不用急，到月末的时候可以只复习到全书的一半；英语在这段时间也是主要做阅读，继续加强语感和词汇量；专业课也是以一门专业课为主，抓住重点，注重理解，在理解的基础上学会熟记。到十一月一号的时候，第二门专业课教材要全部看完。
（3）从十一月一号到十二月一号：每天的三个时间段，也是分别复习政治、英语和专业课。政治按照上月的复习方法继续复习，到月末的时候可以完成全书的另一半。所以复习完政治基本上一共要花两个月的时间。政治的第一遍复习是很重要的，所以花的时间也最长，在复习的时候一定要认真，这样会为自己打下很好的基础。在这段时间里，英语就要开始单项训练了。要保证自己在考试要求的时间内完成完形填空和七选五段落选择。这个月的时间就要认真训练好这两个；专业课复习也是按部就班，在月末时候要完成第三本专业课的教材。
（4）从十二月一号到一月一号：每天三个时间段，也是分别复习政治、英语和专业课。不过这段时间主要是进行第二轮复习。政治就要开始大量做题，做完题要翻阅复习资料，加深记忆；英语这时候就要开始训练作文了，每天写一篇作文，写完之后再看看标准答案上的文章，找出它的闪光点，碰到好的句子和词汇一定要记住，要为我所用；专业课的复习，这段时间主要是做历年的真题，通过做真题发现命题的特点，再回过头来看教材以便找出自己第一轮复习时的遗漏点。
（5）从一月一号到一月七号：这段时间调整心态很重要，一定要保证好充足的睡眠时间和保持自信的态度。适当的时候可以看看书和以前做过的题目。我的整个考研备战就是按照这五个步骤来的，步步为营，最终也如愿考上了硕士研究生，希望我的这个计划也能够给明年考研的学弟学妹一点启示。
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关于考研备考，由于初试在前，复试在后，初试的成败直接决定有无复试机会及其结果好坏。因此，初试的重要性不言而喻。下面，我就从三个方面谈谈初试。第一个问题是，同学们考不考数学。第二个问题是，若考数学，又如何选择学校。最后一个问题是，若考数学并且确定了学校，又如何备考。实际上，前两个问题，我把它称之为方向性问题，即同学们要结合自身实际情况合理定位;至于第三个问题，我称之为方法性问题，即同学们在合理定位之后要制定具体的备考方案并有效执行。显而易见，方向性问题在前而方法性问题在后，方向性问题处理的好坏直接关系到同学们最后能在多大程度上实现自己的预期目标。因此，方向性问题对于同学们来说很重要，只有瞄准方向并且用力适度，那么弓箭才可能射中靶子。同理，同学们在考研备考时只有选择了合适的学校然后付之于有效的实际行动，那么实现自己的预期目标就不会有太大的`悬念。关于方法性问题，其他考研成功的同学对此见解颇多，因此我就不再赘述。我呢，就重点回答前面两个问题，这也是我认为考研最后能否成功中最关键的第一步。
问题一：考不考数学。对于这个问题，我认为同学们应该问自己是否喜欢数学，如果说讨厌，那我建议这类同学不要报考考研要考数学的专业，兴趣是最好的老师;如果说喜欢但本人基础薄弱，我认为这类同学应该问自己能否有信心通过艰苦的训练从而的的确确把数学水平提高，如果你的回答非常有信心，那我建议你考虑要考数学的专业，毕竟这类专业通常都是热门专业如金融。但是，如果你的回答是可能会提高然而要牺牲其他科目的正常备考用时，那么我建议你最好选择考研不考数学的专业如法硕和公共管理。最后一类同学就是，他们不但喜欢数学而且其水平和能力也比周围一些或很多同学要强，对于此类同学，在其他条件相同的情况下，只要你们的英语水平能够至少达到国家A区分数线，我建议你选择金融实力很强的大学。
问题二：若考数学，又如何选择学校。我认为对于我们金融学院极少数同学而言，如果你的英语和数学都很好，英语可达到60分以上而数学可以达到120以上，同时专业学得也不错，那么我建议你将自己的目标学校定位如：武汉大学、厦门大学、上海财经大学和中央财经大学等，其中我提醒同学们在选择后三所学校时务必十分谨慎，因为这三所学校的初试竞争是相当地激烈，对于我们金融学院的同学而言，一般初试分数如果达不到380到390之间，是很难杀入复试的。如果你们的英语一般(在这里指很可能只达到国家线55左右)，而数学很好或好(在这里指120左右)，我建议同学们将自己的目标学校定位如：中南财经政法大学、西南财经大学和东北财经大学等，这类学校不但在复试分数线相对前几所大学要低，而且复试淘汰率也相对较低。但是，它们的金融专业实力在全国很强，我个人感觉我们金融学院考研同学中相当部分同学选择这几所学校才属正常。特别地，我要提出华中科技大学可以作为我们金融学院那些想报考如武汉大学、厦门大学等但信心不够足，同时又不想报考中南财经政法大学的同学优先考虑的大学。最后，如果你的英语和数学都一般，基本上都只能达到国家线或以上一点点，专业还不错，那么我建议你将自己的目标学校定位如：天津财大、南京财大和江西财大等，其实几所大学金融专业实力也不错，对于那些只想获得硕士文凭后就参加工作并且基础不太好的同学而言，我认为这几所大学可以作为他们的选择。
最后，我送金融学院所有考研同学几句话：宝剑锋从磨砺出，梅花香自苦寒来，今天的付出，明天的收获。
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一、经典句型
1. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases related to smoking.
根据最近的一项调查，每年有400万人死于与吸烟相关的疾病。
2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业感到不满。
3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.
没有一项发明像互联网这样受到如此多的表扬和批评。
4. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.
许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有利于身体健康。
5. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前必须采取有效的措施。
6. Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and great efforts should be made to protect local environment from the harmful effects of international tourism.
应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境不受国际旅游业的不利影响。
7. Many city residents complain that there are so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.
许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们花很长时间等来的却是一辆已经载满乘客的公交车。
8. There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.
不可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：市政部门应该采取有力措施来解决。
9. An investigation shows that women tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.
一项调查显示妇女对退休持赞成态度。
10. A proper part-time job does not occupy students’ too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of their time on study. As an old saying goes：“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy。”
一份适当的兼职工作并不会占用学生太多的时间。事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不利于学生的健康。俗话说得好：“只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。”
二、针对性句型
1. 我深信……： I am greatly convinced (that)从句/I am greatly assured (that)从句
【例】 我深信预防胜于治疗。=I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.
2. ……是很容易证明的： It can be easily proved (that)从句
【例】 时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。=It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time。
3. ……无论如何强调都不为过： ...cannot be overemphasized
【例】 交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。=The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized。
4. 在我看来……;我认为……: In my opinion.../To my mind.../As far as I am concerned.../I am of the opinion that从句
【例】 在我看来，打电子游戏既花费时间又有损健康。=In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health。
5. 不用说……: It goes without saying that从句/Needless to say that从句/It is obvious that从句/Obviously,主语+谓语(+宾语)
【例】 不用说，早睡早起是值得的。=It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours。
6. ……是不可能的;无法……: There is no+doing sth. /There is no way of+doing sth. /There is no possibility of+doing sth. /It is impossible to do sth. /It is out of the question to do sth. /No one can+do sth. /...cannot+do sth。
【例】 不可否认，事业成功的关键在于身心健康。=There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind。
7. 人人知晓……/毫无疑问……： Everyone knows (that)从句/There is no doubt that从句
【例】 毫无疑问，近视在我国的年青人中是一个严重的问题。=There is no doubt that near?sightedness is a serious problem among the youth in our country。
8. ……是必要的： It is necessary that+主语 (+should)+谓语
……是重要的'： It is important/essential+that 主语 (+should)+谓语
……是适当的： It is proper that+主语 (+should)+谓语
……是紧急的： It is urgent that+主语 (+should)+谓语
【例】 我们应当保持公共场所的清洁。=It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean。
9. 据说……: It is said that从句
一般认为……： It is thought that从句
众所周知……： It is known that从句
据报道……： It is reported that从句
一般估计……： It is estimated that从句
【例】 众所周知，阅读增加我们的知识，开阔我们的心胸。=It is known that reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind。
10. ……的主要原因是……: The main reason why...is that从句
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一、开头常用经典句型
(1)Although it is commonly held (felt / accepted / agreed) that..., it is unlikely to be true that...
(2)There is an element of truth in this argument / statement, but it ignores a deeper and more basic (important / essential) fact / reason that...
(3)The main (obvious / great) problem with / in this argument / view is that it ignores the basic fact that...
(4)It would be possible (natural / reasonable) to think (believe / take the view) that..., but it would be wrong to claim / argue that...
(5)Logical as this argument and I wholeheartedly agree with it, it appears absurd when... is taken into consideration / account.
二、转承常用经典句型
(1)Although the popular idea / belief is that..., a new / recent study (research / survey / investigation) shows (indicates / demonstrates) that...
(2)One may attribute / ascribe the decrease / change to..., but...is not by itself an adequate explanation.
(3)There are many (several / a number of / a lot of) causes / reasons for this dramatic (remarkable / significant) growth / change in... First,...Second,...Finally,...
(4)It will exert (have / produce) profound (far-reaching / remarkable / considerable / beneficial / favorable / undesirable / disastrous) effect (influence) on...
(5)A multitude of factors could account for (contribute to / lead to / result in / influence) the change (increase / decrease / success / failure / development) in...
三、结尾常用经典句型
(1)All the evidence /analysis supports (justifies / confirms / warrants / points to) a(n) unshakable (unmistakable / sound / just) conclusion that...
(3)It is high time that we should place (lay / put) great (special / considerable) emphasis on the improvement (development / increase / promotion) of...
(4)We must look (search / call / cry) for an immediate action (method / measure), because the present/current situation (phenomenon / tendency / state / attitude) of..., if permitted /allowed to continue /proceed, will surely /certainly lead to /result in/ the end (destruction / heavy cost) of...
(5)No easy method (solution / recipe / remedy) can be at hand (found / guaranteed) to solve (resolve / tackle) the problem of..., but the common (general / public) recognition of (realization of / awareness of / commitment to) the necessity (importance / significance) of...might be the first step towards change (on the right way / in the right direction).
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The earth scale change of climate has brought a new kind of natural disaster and the developed and complicated city system is holding a latent risk of expanding the damage artificially. Also people has been spoiling the health since the immense quantity of chemicals have been produced and already used in pursuit of convenience and various toxic substances have been produced unintentionally and accumulated in environment. Therefore,We need some countermeasures from the viewpoint to prevent the city environment form disaster and to manage environmental risks.
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In recent years, more and more people would like to participate in the test for national civil servants. Many graduates or employees consider the occupation of civil servant as their most ideal choice. They craze for the civil servant test and some of them even put all of their eggs in one basket. This phenomenon has attracted widespread attention.
In fact, its not difficult to explain such a craze. Above all, nowadays college students face great employment pressure. Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in China, becomes their preferable selection. Moreover, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which become a significant advantage enjoyed by many people. Besides, the high social position of civil servants is an important factor drawing many people to compete for this profession.
In my opinion, this craze in civil servant test will continue in the following years because the highly competitive situation for employment is uneasy to change. However, with the perfection of employment system and more choices for career, people tend to have an overall understanding on employment. (186 words)
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